hey Synge,
I don't know why I can't comment on your post 'the GOOD part', I tried twice, but still failed, so I just leave the comment here.
I think your structure is pretty good. and maybe you could also mention the violent issue if there's enough time. A common example is the extremely violent video games that children are addicted to – tend to increase the aggressive tendencies in children (http://www.buzzle.com/articles/media-censorship-why-is-censorship-good.html).
Thanks,
Aili
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